Scripting Blues & Movie Reviews
Monday, February 16th, 2009
Hello and good Monday. I checked the stats and found that the top three countries viewing the comic are the USA, Canada, and a surprise with Germany passing up the UK now. Hi, Germany! Glad to have you!
Let’s see, first I’d like to apologize for the delay of comic today - I’m still getting used to all of the functions of comic press, and as Anne mentioned in the last, there are plenty of buttons you can touch that will break things. But it’s all arights now, and the next month’s comics are all all uploaded and ready, along with the vote incentives, so we’ll cross our fingers and hope that works. On to better business.
Upon seeing the first 10 pages I realized, with some dismay, how painfully slow the story moves. They’re all important pages, as you will see later, but I think it took me seeing them in order to figure out how to make things move at their proper pacing. So I went and revised the script from page 10 on and it is a lot tighter now, but that still leaves us wading through the swamp for now. Anne and I have discussed eventually going back and redoing some of those pages, and perhaps we will. But for now, we will go ever forwards, safe in the knowledge that both the writing and the architectural perspective get better from here.
On a non-comic related note, I went to see Neil Gaiman’s Coraline last Friday and it was, in summary, wonderfully creepy. First, as far as the animation and the cinematography is concerned, the choice to go with stop motion was perfectly apropos for the story, as it gave a very doll-like quality to the characters. Things weren’t as oozy as they generally are in Gaiman stories, but it still made the movie as far as ambiance went.
As far as the story itself, though there were some things changed from the book, overall I thought they did a good job, and I understand why some things were added or altered. I’m a little surprised that Gaiman himself did not do the treatment and the screenplay, as he already proved his chops with Stardust and Beowulf, but Selick did a good job. Nothing can quite compare to the prickling sensation one gets on the back of the neck when reading Gaiman’s narratives, but I found myself jumping out of my seat plenty of times nevertheless.
So if you’re looking for something to do this weekend, Coraline. I recommend it.
See you next week,
Jen






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